Friday, 4 December 2009

ललन और लोलिता को सांस्कृतिक ठेकेदारों से बचाते हैं जज पंत

मैं एक जज की गरिमा को पूरी मजबूती से स्थापित करना चाह रहा था...इसलिये जज पंत के रुटीन को लेकर चल रहा था ताकि दर्शकों के बीच जज पंत की पहचान एक गंभीर जज के रूप में हो। सीन 6 और 7 में कहानी को आगे बढ़ाते हुये एक जज के मैनेरिज्म को ही स्थापित किया गया है। उसका नौकर भंडारी और बाकी के गनमैन जज पंत की आभा को ही विस्तार दे रहे हैं। सीन 8 में ललन और लोलिता एक बार फिर आ रहे हैं। वेलेंनटाइन डे के दिन ललन लोलिता को लेकर जाते हुये एक पार्क के करीब एक सांस्कृति संगठन का निशाना बनता है और जज पंत उन्हें बचाते हैं।

Scene 6

Characters : Pant, Bhandari and four gunmen
Ext/morning/ portico
(Pant comes out from the door and advances to the portico. A white ambassador car is standing there. A police man with his gun and a driver are waiting for him. Having seen Pant the gunman open the back door of the car, the second police man sits at his driving seat.)

Pant
(standing at the car’s back door) kal tum bata rahe the ki tumahari shadi ho gai hai?
Bhandari

Ji sahab.
Pant
Ghar kitane din se nahi gaye?
Bhandari
Ek sal se.
Pant
Main kuch din ke liye bahar ja raha hun, ….Tum chaho to chuti le sakate ho…aaj se hi.
Bhandari
(Happily) Ji bahut acha sahib, lekin aap ja kanha rahe hai?
(Pant looks at Bhandari. Bhadari feels that he has asked something wrong. He drops the news papers in the back seat of the car. Pant enters into the car. The gunman closes the door and sits on the front seat besides the driver. The car starts moving. At the main gate two gunmen are standing. Both of them salute Pant. Pant calls one of them )
Pant
Kal se yaha kisi bhi gunman ki duty nahi hogi…main bahar ja raha hun.
Gunman
Sir hame order mil gaya hai . Sham 4 baje tak humlog post chor denge.
(Pant asks driver to go ahead.The car goes out of the main door.)

Cut to…

Scene 7
Characters—Pant and two police man.
Ext/day/ roadside
7A.
The car is running on a road. Pant is sitting inside the car and reading a news papers.
7B. At four square roads, a traffic police sees Pant’s car and salutes. He stops all the traffic and gives way to pant’s car.
Note- The dignity of a Judge car is established in the traffic world.
Cut to…



Scene 8
Characters—Pant, a gunman, a driver, Lalan, Lolita, five boys and ten passerby.
Ext/day/in front of a public park.
(Lalan is being beaten by five boys. He is protesting according to his own way, discussing with them. Lolita is standing besides him, she is fearful. Some passerby are watching them from some distance )
Lalan
Dekho hath mat lagana…Hamari jo marji aaye kare …tumlog kaun hote ho rokane wale?
The first boy
(slaps him) Sarvajanik jaghon per ashlilata failana mana hai….samaj per bura prabhav parata hai.
The second boy
(The second boy snatches a heart shape balloon from Lolita’s hand)
Abhi dudh ke dant tute nahi aur chali hai muhabbat karane….tere ghar walon ko pata hai ki tu isq ladane nikali hai ?
Lalan
Usase kaya bat kar rahe ho..mujhase bat karo.
The third boy
(slaps Lalan from behind) Ha, bol kaya bat hai….vo kaya kahate hai Velentine day manane aaya hai….angrej chale gaye lekin unake tote abhi bhi yaha ud rahe hai.

Lolita
(In a slow voice) Lalan chalon yaha se.
Lalan
Tum thaharo main inse bat karata hun.

The fourth boy
Galati isaki nahi isake ma-bap ki hai…
The second boy
(Blasting the balloon at the Lolita face)
Tere dil ki hawa nikal gai.

Inter cut…..
(:Pant’s car is coming. He sees some disturbance. When the car comes very near to the place he recognizes Lalan )
Pant

(to gunman) us ladake ko yaha le aao.
(The car stops at the Lalan. All persons looks at the car. The gunman comes out )
Gunman
(Harshly) kaya ho raha hai yaha?
The first boy
(touching the Lalan chick)
Apane yahan ke kuch bachoon per bhulentaine baba ka bhut swar ho gaya hai…use hi deshi andaj me utar rahe hai.
Lolita

(To gunmen) Sir ye log Lalan ko pit rahe hai.
The second boy
Jab bache bigar jate hai to ma-bap unhe thora-bahut pitate hai.
Gunman
Cahlo sab hato yahan se.
(gunman forces everyone to leave the place. All the boys move smoothly )
Gunman
(coming near to Lalan) Tumhe saheb bula rahe hai.
(Lalan comes to car and Pant opens the window)
Lalan
Sri aap!
Pant
Kaya ho raha hai yahan?
Lalan
Main Lolita ko purpose karane ke liye yaha lekar aaya tha…aur ye log disturb karane lage.

Pant
(Looking to Lolita)
Purpose kiya?
Lalan
Abhi nahi Sir.
Pant
Then do it. ….car me baitho tum logon ko kahi chor dunga.
Lalan
Vo chale gaye hai….ab koi pareshani nahi hogi.
Pant

Are you sure?
Lalan
Yes, sir.
Pant

(Moving to driver)
let us move.

(The car starts running)
Inter-cut
(The car inters into a court campus and stops in special gallery where a board is hanging …specially for Judge )
(अगला किश्त अगले शुक्रवार को...)


1 comment:

सुस्वागतम!!